This week we did a narrative writing, our teacher told us that how to write a narrative writing.
First she ask us do any of us know what is a narrative writing? and the teacher let us discuss, and we are a group of three and I am with Bella and Kitty, and they are all my grade three classmate, when we discuss about it, they said that they don't know what is a narrative, but I tell them do you forget that we learned this in grade three?
After our discussion the teacher ask who knows what is a narrative writing? I raise my hand and the teacher picked me, I told her that a narrative writing have a beginning, middle and a end.
Next, the teacher told us that a narrative writing is a subject that you want to write about, after the teacher have down talking we begin to write and the subject is the most hardest time of our life.
My subject is how my mom's friend lost my dog, and in the narrative writing I tell that when a vacation come my give the dog to her friend and when we came she told us that she lost our dog, I was very sad even now.
This is my lost dog and she is very kind, she don't bite:
I think that your decision to write about the lost dog was a good choice, as often it is easier to write about something that really happened. I could tell even from reading your blog post that this was a very emotional event. I look forward to reading your narrative essay.
ReplyDeleteCady, I think you can use Mrs, Mr, Ms, not just calling them teacher. It can make people confusing when they are trying to know what class were you in.
ReplyDeleteCady, I think you can use Mrs, Mr, Ms, not just calling them teacher. It can make people confusing when they are trying to know what class were you in.
ReplyDeleteokay I will change it next time when I write the word teacher I will change to Mrs, Mr, Ms
ReplyDeleteThank you Yubin
Good Job, and I agree with Yubin.
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