MY PUBLISH NARRATIVE WRTING

  Last week in writing class we publish our narrative writing, my writing was about bullying it was about how a girl named Kelly make the two bullies to be good. If you want to see my narrative writing Here it is: 

                              Bullying

                                                                                                                              -Cady

It was hot and sunny, summer definitely arrive, so it made Kelly and her family wanted to go to Guam. When they arrived they heard that the summer camp was so cool and it have art class and it made their parent want Kelly to go to the summer camp. When Kelly heard that news, she was dancing in her room humming songs because of that way, so she could make more friends.      Finally the day arrived, she pack all the things that she need for the summer camp. While she is going to the camp, she sing happily in the car.  When she arrived the summer camp door,  she first came to her locker, then she looked inside it ,  she saw beautiful pens, color pencils and notebooks. Moreover, her locker was in the middle of Anna and Rina’s locker.  When Kelly went to Math, Art and English class,  when the three class was over, she find out that the girls next to her locker was the same three class that she had, consequently that made Kelly think she wanted to make friend with them. Therefore, the next day Kelly decided to talk to Anna and Rina, Kelly said，"hello, can we be friend?” Anna and Rina said, " no!”      When  Kelly come back home she told her mom that she tried to be friends with Anna and Rina, but they said," no.” Kelly’s mom said, " That’s okay, there is many  ways you can friend with them” Kelly said, " what?” Kelly’s mom said, " you can  teach them to be a good people.”   The next day Kelly went to sch0ol,  she was talking to the guide person who guide the summer camp student,  just then Anna and Rina come they talk to the guide person, but didn’t feel what Kelly feel.  Later that day, when Kelly, Rina and Anna  went to the Art class, Kelly  sit beside Anna and Rina. When the teacher ask three people a group, so Anna, Rina and Kelly have to build a project that they wanted, but together, when they were sitting there. Kelly said, " can we be friends?” this time Anna and Rina think more carefully, because this morning they interrupt Kelly and the guide talk, they both said, " yes.” When Kelly came home she told her mom about the news, that Anna and Rina agree to be friend with her.  The next day she talk to them and she hear about their plan it was about how to make student at the summer camp feel bad,Kelly said,  " Anna and Rina why are your plans so evil?“ “Because we are the bullies at the summer camp!”answer Anna and Rina. Then Kelly said, " Then would you want to be friends with me?” Anna answered” because we wanted to train you like this” Kelly ask”  why me?” because you are the people who wanted to be friend with us said, "Rina and Anna.  After that talk at school she feel bad about it, because she want to make Anna and Rina to be more caring about the students. When it was time for lunch she sited together with Anna and Rina, Kelly decided to have a talk to Rina and Anna to change their mind about the plan they have yesterday. Kelly said, " you can try to be caring to other student in summer camp, and it is a lot of fun when you try to be caring not just be bad.” Anna and Rina think of a bit and they said, " no!”
You can't change our plan, because we are the bullying team. The next day Anna and Rina decided to bully the first the smaller kids, because they are small and they can't  describe very well. At the break time they put their foot their so the smaller kid would tripped, they also put down a toy that could make scary noise, when a 5 or 6 years old kid went to pick that toy it made the kid cry. When Kelly see that she think they must stop making the smaller children feel bad so Kelly began to think. The next day Anna and Rina is going  to make  the teachers at the summer camp feel bad, first they put soap water near the teacher’s desk, when Kelly saw that she knew it must stop. The next day, Kelly told them a story about bullying kids, the story was about a two girl one was called Lily and her partner was Ally, whenever they do the bad things they go to the principal office. When Anna and Rina heard that story they were scared that their school principal will  know, so they never bully other kids.When the last day arrived Kelly have to go back to her own country, Anna and Rina definitely know because when kelly told them the story they were glad that kelly told them about the story because they don’t want the principal know at their own school  so Anna and Rina they are best friend, what do bestfriend do? Of course leave a email so they could contact each other.